Sucks
This sucks. You've just taken some sprites and animated them. The text is full of mistakes, it's boring and the drawings you made... Try practicing more, and make sure your text is without mistakes. And don't make tasteless jokes at the end. They're not funny. And if you're really bad at drawing, but really good at animating, just use some fire sprites too and don't draw them yourself...
well i never was good at drawing on the computer and it would be a really long process just to go and draw the characters and color them by hand and put them on my computer so im trying hard to make it as good as possible right now.
Not Bad, in fact, i like it!
Gotta Improve it, but i think you just started in this thing, so you're doing pretty good! keep it up!
kinda new but it was heavly weighed with tweens except for the battle.
not too bad
two tips
1 you should work on your grammar
2 get a different background.... black is pretty boring
what kind of back round and i am english and i ha to salvage and fix what i could for 2 hours. by the can be a voice actor if so look at my news.
Needs work but good idea
There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors but overall a good flash
thanks. hey can you help as a voice actors