I like the sounds you got going. But 3 minutes is a bit long. You should try to cut it quicker to the change you have around the 2:10 mark. I think it would be a lot better then. But good work! Keep it up. :)
I like the sounds you got going. But 3 minutes is a bit long. You should try to cut it quicker to the change you have around the 2:10 mark. I think it would be a lot better then. But good work! Keep it up. :)
Thanks for the insight! A lot of these are rough, especially this one. I agree it needs more of a structure, and less of an improv feel. I might redo these in the next month or so, and I'll definitely keep that in mind. Thanks for the review!
I'm going to be honest and say that I don't know enough about music to leave any form of constructive criticism...but I do love this song. It's going on my work playlist.
Reviews don't need to be advice on what's good, or what can be better - musicians love hearing that people enjoy their work. Getting a song on someone's work playlist is awesome for me! I'm glad you enjoy it.
Im really happy with the piece, I was looking for ambient and I got it with this. Also grats on titling something 'shifting sands' and not using excessive sitars! lol
Haha, no excessive sitars for me! I'm glad you found the piece ambient and go where I was coming from. The piece is quite simple overall, but I feel it has a great mood, and that mood alone makes it great.
I think it's a solid piece, good job. I will agree with the snare comment, though.
The snare was automated, and I unfortunately didn't know how to edit it. I agree though, it's too loud.
Glad you liked it otherwise. - thanks for the review.
This is quite good actually, like for an intense battle that is about to brake out - this suits it quite well! Sometimes the basic stuff is better :) kind of like more is less or less is more (something like that) I write a lot of stories and this is kind of inspiring, thanks!
Serrawyn~
I couldn't agree more! Sometimes I feel my lack of multi-tracking hinders me, but then I get clean, simple pieces like this and don't mind so much :)