First Time
Not to bad for your first movie. Animation needs a bit of work.
Reviews for "Elf Vs Orc - In Greenwood"
incanus responds:
needs a total rehaul, imho. =)
Great job ole' chap,keep them coming
Two thumbs way way up
incanus responds:
lol... too kind. ( I mean it )
definate potential
you may need some practice, but off to a good start. keep em coming
incanus responds:
hehe
good idea
good idea for a movie, but the animation was a little slow and crappy (not that i could do my better prolly) but it was a good idea for a flick. Keep workin on your animation and you might have a kick ass movie for this. Keep up the good work
incanus responds:
thanks
Suggestions....
For a first work, this isn't bad. You actually drew characters as opposed to stick men, and drew backgrounds and attempted sound. All very good for a beginner. I suggest in future you try to work on timing, the arrow was far too slow moving. You also need more angles and more action. Basically you need more drawings. Welcome to the wonderful world of FLASH....
incanus responds:
Thank you for your suggestions... I was thinking the same thing about the arrow being so slow, so, last night, I fixed it, and just uploaded an updated file, that should run a lot smoother, and be a bit funnier. :) I don't really like the stick-men thing, don't get me wrong, some of the animations with stick men are pretty cool, but I prefer using real characters with faces and accessories, if you know what I mean. I am receiving a lot of good reviews on this, so I believe I am going to keep on and expand this series. Perhaps I'll get better as I go along. :)
Thanks for your time,
Incanus the Grey