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Reviews for "Smoke's Rude Awakening"

Made me chuckle

Not too long but it's good that way, the humor made me laugh...

What's the big deal about 'copying' another flash's animation technique? Almost everyone has done something like it with the Madness series, but nobody's complaining about that. Keep up the good work!

Avojaifnot responds:

I don't know, I felt like I had potential when I got a decent score on More Dragonforce.

No.

It's not right to reupload something to get a daily. It's just this random cat telling of an M&M. Origanal? What!?! This is just pure, shamless begging. Marlo was better, even if it was sprites, the surprise was funny. No humour, the opening part took forever and theanimation consisted of head tilts, floating hands,eye opening, and one moment of lip sync. Next time try more frame by frame then random prophanaties, and NEVER resubmit for awards. Believe me, I'll nine silent flashes (ten if theres music, thats not much work, just another layer in flash and a trip to the ng audio portal). If this was in jugement I would of blammed. 2 for an attemped at humor and some good shadin.You can't blame marLo for stolen caracters, you stole too, from bunnykill, and sprites or not, its still stealing. Shamfull.

Avojaifnot responds:

I didn't steal - I mimicked the graphics as similar as possible. But I understand why my score is SHIT now.

What...?

I don't think it's funny at all... :/

A little improved

I see you changed it a tad bit in the intro from the last time. This can still be improved I think though.

Animation/Storyline: Bunnykill characters and an M&M guy, apparently who woke Smoke up and he starts to cuss him out since he magically got Tourettes somehow when he wakes up. I noticed you zoomed in on his face a bit and showed detail for one of the eyes and the mouth while he was speaking which seems to be pretty nice I guess.

Audio: First it was a soft silly tune and then he wakes up and sounds like Tourette's guy, you hear him fall from his chair and throwing his sunglasses at Snowball.

Overall: If you like Bunnykill then you could always create your own characters to use, even though you say this took a month I think if you sped the process a bit and put a bit more heart and effort into this then it could go a little farther as well, nice effort anyways.

SCTE3

Avojaifnot responds:

I may add subtitles and stuff like that

Nothing here is original either.

You've taken Tourette's Guy audio and combined it with high action characters who are another artist's intellectual property. Neither has anything to do with the other and you fail to create a memorable or original moment. You could have used the same audio with any other character and it still would have been just as bland. Usually a parody makes fun of its source material, instead of just jamming two unrelated things together and saying "LOOK IT IS LOLS!" The animation is fine, but there's little humor to be found.

Avojaifnot responds:

I understand. BUT look at the person who combined Mario and Halo in a 30 second predictable short, and actually got an award. (COUGH COUGH LOOK AT THE MOVIE CALLED MarLo)