Pretty good.
Great flash.
All I can say.
Reviews for "MarLo"
Dissapointed...
I was expecting a t-bagging and it did not happen :( Personal disappointment aside, I think that this flash is the very definition of short but sweet. Keep up the good work!
yoshiblue1733 responds:
Haha funny you should say so, I was even thinking about tea-bagging Mario! I will consider that for sure!
Thanks!
-¥oshiblue
lol
I knew what was coming as soon as I heard "Flag captured" :D
yoshiblue1733 responds:
That's exactly what another classmate of mine said when I showed them this particular clip xP.
Would there be anything you would change to make it more appealing?
Thanks for the response!
-¥oshiblue
short and sweet
4/5 8/10, did not expect the ending at all, gj !
good job for your first flash
i agree with SCTE3 though i also suggest to avoid overused things like halo teabagging its sorta become a cliche anyways i think your flashes would be alot better if your would try to do something a little more original and less predictable it was good for your first flash on newgrounds and you could become more opoular cuase u have the talent to
yoshiblue1733 responds:
Hey there!
Thanks for review and yes I am well aware that this is very UNORIGINAL xD, mostly for a class of mine but a few classmates enjoyed it so I decided to post it up here for shits and giggles.
This will probably be the only time I say this on here until I post it up in the near future but I am actually working on something much much bigger then this. Certainly putting much more effort into it and ofcourse it is completely original xD. (No Mario, Halo, Sonic, etc). It does have quite the in-depth storyline to it aswell so hope Newgrounds likes it.
Anyhooooo thanks again for reviewing!
Cheers!