A tad too predictable
I saw the punchline in this movie coming from a mile away... Although the animation and drawings were really well done, the action was far too short to really enjoy. You might also want to work on the sound effects for the footsteps, sounds nothing like walking AT all.
Overall its ok, but not perfect.
Most sound effects, including the footsteps were taken from internet though. I swear to God that was the best one out there : (
Thanks for the great review. ^^
Needs More...
It's funny but it's way too short. Maybe if the kid playing the game said a one-liner or something then that would've been hilarious!
you know, originally, there was another kid standing behind the goth whispering the sentence: "ooh, what a sensitive soul you are."
There is no way I can make that sound well animated.
its ok
very short and only one funny part really. Gaudy background too, but the animation is decent at least.
fair
Used kid paddle as an inspiration, didn't you?
it wasn't really bad, but you should come up with some own ideas for a shorty.
i still give you 5 stars for the graphics and effort.
Good.
I like how the drawings look that of sunday comics in the newspaper.