Hey Ben!
Oy, nice to see you do something else than you usual saggy-tits big lips stuff!
Critiqueing; I like it, its quite smooth, and Im actually quite surprised this worked the way it did (with all that erasing...)
I think it could be improved by having more of a clear story, especially in the first half of the animation. Also, the figures you used were quite cliche, you could try adding more "style" to them, if you catch my drift...
I'm pretty sure I did this before I really started drawing in the style that I draw now, but I do intend on doing some nice saggy tit animations in the future.
Lmao.
This was a funny story, really, but lacked something, somewhere..
I would also appericiate a mute button.
Thanks,
Vedu
great stuff
good work looks real cool, always like these kind of things,
next time tho use a better camera and put a big lamp on the paper, then u get better pictures that look the same.
pretty good
effort shows, like it
Pretty cool dude.
Although I feel that because it was charcoal, drawing this and animating at the same time must've been quite tiresome.
Mistakes probably often occurred.
But you know...this is still not bad. Sure there have been others done better but this is the first I've seen in an attempt to use something messy as charcoal.
I wonder....Why not give Oil Painting animation a try?
Can you imagine the beauty of it all!
Oooo I like the sound of that, not sure how well it would actually pan out though. Might play with that in the future :P