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Reviews for "Emerald Steath part 1.5"

Overall animation isn't to bad

I think you need to work a bit on the dialog. Also use a spell check perhaps? :P Some of the dialog is hard to read since it isn't displayed long enough.

Maybe add a black bar at the bottom and put all the dialogue there so it is easily readable. You could also put the name before the speech like "Mario: text goes here"

kirbyky100 responds:

im doin tht for episode 3, the space-bar dialog boxes Alvin uses

sigh

A cheap rip off of SMBZ. Not that it matters anyway whether it was original or not. Sprite animations lack so much but will get passed anyways. So, I guess it had good animation at least for sprites, comparable to early Alvin-Earthworm. Maybe if sprites could just have original stories and different styles of fighting then maybe I could think higher of them, but alas no.

kirbyky100 responds:

it seems like tht, but the story will b ratehr different, i have not included the main guys, tht will b in episode 3