To soft.
the animation was great, but I didn't feel the intecatiy a stick fight should have, it felt like they were slapping each other around. try to make the screen shack for heavy hitting attacks, or have the screen move haster when he disapears from sight.
anthoer thing, when the stick men were fighting, you seemed to have limited your self to useing maybe one or two to interact with the main character, expand on that, use ALL the stick me, have them all move aroun,d even if they dont see him, have them look around because they hear something weird going on.
and show more blood, a stick flash should always have lots of blood ;)