disapointing
I love the art.
the lines, sound, story (or lack of), other character, and delivery of good artwork is all not so good.
really though this would be a easy 10 out of 10 if you just made the rest of it, have him punching kids or raping girls or something.... anything build it up a bit.
You have a total gem in the art but gems are pretty much just ulgy rocks unless they are cut and polished and stuff.
Seeing him sit at all table and pass out was a big letdown for me, sorry.
also you might want to take down that part about stealing it, if you did or not, it's just going to make people take the time to look into if it's stolen or whatever or make people try to report you and in the end probably just make things a mess for you and everyone.