... WHAAAHHH?
... im sorry but the story line.. MAKES NO SENSE
the kid goes along with this random chick for what reason?
how can he trust her? he cant, you provide nothing with the story line in this first episode at all and barely nothing happens in it at all.
the red outline makes it look more strange than artistic and the proportions leave nothing to the mind
3 stars, it looked like you were trying to go for something big to make into a series but, the outcome wasn't in your favor