Nice new song man, too bad it had to cost you an arm. Patch up that thing, hope it's not too painful, well, just get well soon man. Been there, done that, sucks balls.
Overall good song, the mixing and mastering is good, it jussed misses some coherence. It might have been a bit better if it would have returned somewhat more often to the "base" of the song. For example, the part between 2:30-3:00, just lasted too long, perhaps shortening that one down would bring it all together a bit better. It wasn't bad though, it did have a good feeling, but most build-ups should just be shortened.
Sorry for the crude words while you're there with a broken arm but I think you deserve a good review nonetheless. Break the builds some more, arms less and it would've been one of the best I've heard. 4/5, 7/10. Keep practicing, you got this.
Greetz, Tomster1000