Nice fear!
A melancholic story , with a very optimistic end . Very good plot , your graphics could be even better , good work !
Nice fear!
A melancholic story , with a very optimistic end . Very good plot , your graphics could be even better , good work !
__OK
I read the reviews below and I know that the only thing that made them sad was the music, they may not know themselves.. anyway. The art was OK, the story it was trying to teach was IMO silly but the animation was good, a bit boring at parts no offence.
Overall Good work, compared to soe of the other crap in the portal. ;)
Interesting
The animations were kind of bad, and the drawings weren't the best, But i liked the premise. Th music was the only thing that made it seem sad.
Pretty damn good
I really liked your style of art. It's really unique and it mixed with the music really well. Good length as well. One thing you can do at your level is to start using a template or something for your caption bubbles instead of hand drawing them. That would have made this flash look expertly done. I liked the way the map was drawing itself in front of him. Really neat. Good work, and keep up that creativity you've got. NG is lacking in that department lately.
It was alright but could be better
Although the animation wasnt the best, I liked the little story, I felt it got a bit meh towards the end though and Seans Mustache just looked like it was there to make him look older.
I liked the monster though and Im sure there was a moral lesson in there somewhere as well
:3