Very average
Shit graphics, ok sound, should be mild violence instead of excessive and i'd rather see a slit throat than a slit forehead Having someone slit a forehead is just lame.
Very average
Shit graphics, ok sound, should be mild violence instead of excessive and i'd rather see a slit throat than a slit forehead Having someone slit a forehead is just lame.
Forehead Slash, Huh?
You have the start of something that could turn out to be really good.
These things need answers:
1.) Who/what is this woman?
2.) What was that coming from her mouth?
3.) Who was this man?
4.) Why did she kill him and the others?
Work on it.
Ummm
Slashing someone across the forehead does not kill them.
Needs Effort.
You didn't put a lot of work in this did you? It's bad. Why did Tamara go around killing people anyway? Where did that dude come from? Why did he come? How did he get there? See all this questions? They should have been answered in the flash. Once again it was bad. Try again next time, man.
Creative, but needs a lot of work
Interesting, but needs a storyline. Maybe some background info on the chick, what kind of universe it is based in, or why she wants a pile of skeletons.
Of course the art is marginal, the chick being the only 'somewhat rendered' object
Interesting enough that I'd like to see more development!