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I already posted on DA but I had some other thoughts I wanted to get out.
I enjoyed this as a change from the seriousness of Spoiler's troubles. The comedy was fantastic from start to finish(Beebs singing in his sleep and Baby's escapades had me rolling). I was never too big a fan originally of Shrike and Co but my love of them has been growing as of late, and this new audition really boosted it.
As for voicework: I like the new VA choices. The first time I watched this on DA, I wasn't quite sure how I felt about Shrike's new VA, but watching a few more times, I do think he was a great choice. He really nails Shrike's maniacal laughter.
I will say, watching this audition felt more like something I'd watch on tv than the typical Newgrounds flash. The script is solid, dialogue flows well, characters are all fantastic. I REALLY wish you the best in this tournament and I'll be eagerly waiting to see what you cook up in Round 1. :)