It was really awesome but
I have one constructive bit of advice. I think.
The whole vampire bit where the dude gets bitten, you made the bite marks horizontal, as if she was biting his neck and part of his shoulder or something like that. You might have meant to do that, but I don't know, it doesn't really make sense to me. More zombieish then vampire. Just saying, if it is a vampire bite, the marks should be vertical.