What the fuck was that?
I'll give you a 7 for concept & the music was nice but I just feel it could have been executed differently. Seems like this might have been a hobby piece or a school project. Which means you either did it in a bit of a hurry or didn't bother putting 110% effort into it. It's an ok start I suppose but I still think you could have done better as any sort of professional would expect more.
My suggestion for alternative execution is that you:
SLOW IT DOWN! Life on Earth took billions of years so maybe go with a sharper, less squiggly animation style & give it more of a blending morph instead of a hard turn. Mellow trance music instead of heart attack inducing break dance stuff. Yes this means more work but it also means a better product.
In conclusion, it was ok but keep trying.