not really good.
you have potential for sprite animating (not a big feat) so just keep practicing, customize your sprites a litle, and use a lot of layers. then ur golden!
Reviews for "Mario vs. Sonic (First)"
Pattiasina24 responds:
Alright, thank you. :D
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This is your third submission. By now you should know that crap like this gets blammed on a daily basis.
I'm not going to talk to you about the story when so many other fighting animators use the wimpiest text in lieu of a plot. Another problem that I won't discuss was that it was too short, but can honestly tell me that you expected it to do well when it was only 14 seconds long?
The main problem I had with it was that it was a programming nightmare. There were so many bugs in the clip that I swear could have thought I was sitting next to one of the Aburame Clan's members. When Sonic and Mario jumped up, Mario somehow dons a cape, but after he hit the ground, Sonic drop-kicked him, and Mario entered his spin animation WITHOUT his cape. Oh, and the music sucked.
Please, please, PLEASE remake this movie! You have such potential as a sprite animation, and I'd hate to have it squandered by a video such as this.
Pattiasina24 responds:
I understand that things get blammed like this on a daily basis. But, each time I upload something as this short, it survives, and that is because I get extremely lucky and have sprite fans watch it, and they review and it just causes it to stay.
I really don't see how you can have a plot in a RANDOM fight, if you used sprites I think you'd understand what I'm pointing at. In sprite animations if you create a plot it is considered to drag to a series.
There are MANY problems, and I'm aware of that now. I'm re doing this to improve it. Yeah, I had him lose his cape abilities because of the initial kick Sonic had delivered. I didn't have a SFX to fit it, but..Yeah.
I AM re doing it, and I'm planning on adding 3D scenes, and some more action, with less bugs.
Sonic will win
GR8 animating but make sonic win!
Pattiasina24 responds:
Thank you.
And, I'm not sure if I'll have Mario win, that is, only because I know the difference between Mario fans to Sonic fans. If I made Mario win, I'd get some crazy wrath from Sonic fans.
Good job
I think you cld do better though,just as macjsus said don't just make something real quick and upload to newgrounds.I nvr made a flash animation b4 but i hav wrked with pivot and if u rush through something,it will turn out bad and will be a waste of time.If you r runing low on ideas just let me know amd i cn giv u some [also I make custom or edited sprites so ask if u wnt 1 made 4 ur animation].All in all,keep up the good work.
Pattiasina24 responds:
Alright, thank you, if I get stuck again, I'll ask you for some help!
hum...
it is difficult to say something... i dont like this animating way. those pixeled characs that allready are ready before animating. i think thats lazy. but i could imagin many people like this.
Pattiasina24 responds:
I know, but it is a start on my journey to becoming an animator.