can't give anything for humour, it ain't funny(duh
it's nice... very sweet... and I think you really like that girl a lot, good luck with her. and nice choice of words, I'm really impressed, if she has read it, I'm sure she'll be very touched. boy... if only I had something like that...
sometimes its the little things...
this movie had no flashy graphics, it had no percise sounds, it had no characters... all it had was words, and thats all that it needed... this poem is good dude, i write poetry all the time, and i'll write it until i finally run out of words to say, this was wonderful, i like it a lot, mainly because it is so different, it has heart, and thats all it needs, you did an awesome job, keep it up dude, this was great...
Okay
Pretty poem. I like to see some variety in NG. did you make that up yourself?
Very sweet.
Very sweet , not gay.No I'm not gay either.Neither is he(I think).Doesn't look gay...
anywayz good job
sweet
All you assholes who say this is crap, fuck you!! This guy only wants to show someone how much he cares about her! Let it be, it's a beautiful poem!