Hmm...
Apart from the penis and Luigi thing, this could have been really good. You just ruined a perfectly good flash.
Reviews for "The Small Jack"
A Perfectly Good Flash Ruined
I was quite interested in this flash up until the penis and Luigi appeared. Why ruin a good flash with a bad joke? It just does not make any sense at all unless you were doing this for shit and giggles then good job you fail misrebly.
Hulalaoo responds:
good
Drawings are really pour
You have a lot of potential, but really need to work on your drawings. You have somewhat interesting facial expressions and lighting, but when you get to animating it looks like a rough draft for a story board. Get some detail in there or something? And work on your proportions, the bodies were sometimes out of whack.
um... ok
Didnt know what the crap I was watching. Looks like its just random ass sh*t. Don't reallly see whats so funny.
Sidenote: Ghostling...... wtf, you said you only liked the penis part..... and you give it an 8?
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I hate how you try to make your animations serious and respectably made, and then throw in a horrible joke like mama Luigi or something.