nice...and simply that!
your sister kept insisting we see your work and well she didn't lie, this is great for your first submission!
i give it a 9 because the song was cut off to quickly, it should have slowly transitioned and faded off then that would bee (no pun intended <_>) better.
well good luck with any future projects!
l8s
Thanks! I did edit the song, but for some reason the timing is different on individual computers.
Fireflies is my fav part
But it makes me kinda wonder what kind of symbolism r u aiming 4 hmmm, o well there r certain parts of the animation that flows alright but other than that.....ummm pretty colors, yo n peacce
Well...
I was going to comment on your artistic skill, animation, sound and such (like most people here seem to have done) but realized I'm too lazy to do so... so in short, this is great, cute and a nice song. Good work. :P
So ur Sabrinas sis, right?
It was a nice flash. Very loving feeling. A little random but still sweet. Animations seemed good except the birds eye view wher the lizards shape just moves. The song was nice, sounded good with the flash. I find it odd that you call it Bee & Dino. The bee just dies in the first couple of secconds and the dino who kills him is hardly in for very long either. Then again, that was kinda random, so y not have a random title? Good work, hope to see more.
Yeah , haha. I'm her sister. The Bee isn't supposed to be the main character, I just wanted a dino to squish a bee. :P It got me a 100%. :)
Cool!
This was pretty cool. The art, music and topics compliment each other pretty well, and there's a clear style at work here.
From a storytelling standpoint, however, i think there are some (small) problems. While there is some sort of narrative, and it manages to stay compelling by staying simple, i think it could give you real problems would you ever try a longer piece. Nothing that can't be worked on, however.
Animation-wise i can't really add much since i don't really know much about animating, but it worked for me and it worked for the piece, so its fine. It feels like you really enjoy creating these short works, and the results speak for that love. I'd like to see one where you push yourself to your limits.
Anyways, i liked it. I'd like to see more of your work, hopefully one where you really try to blow everyone's minds. 8/10 and 4/5