wow
Very great story, animation was good, however your reading could have been a bit better. im not saying it was bad, but some more inflection and pause at times would make it have much more depth.
Reviews for "The Tale of Mr. Carter"
SamuriFerret responds:
Okay. It wasn't me who did the voice-over mind...
A lot of people have thought it was. Hmm.
it was great
it gave me goosebumps and was a great idea and a great storyline. but the sound did need a bit more work, if it weren't for the subtitles I wouldn't have known what it was really saying.
Very nice
Good job, I liked it very much :D
very nicely done
the music fit and the poem reading was excellent! very very briefs pauses let the story go by smoothly and quickly. leading to a short flash.
in my opinion the entire 10 was earned.
SamuriFerret responds:
Thanks very much!
Sound quality needs some work
I loved this flash. The story, the animation. All of it was good. The only issue I had was with the voice over. It kept cutting in and out. If you fix that, this will be even better.