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Reviews for "Sketchbook Story"

tOdd

I liked the odd mood set throughout the video. The electroshock thing was very clever. I often wonder myself what a world full of my many odd but interesting drawings would turn out to be. Im glad some people have the time to actually try at it. Not the best animation in the world but its better than what i could of done. May kudos rain upon you.... ^_^

someone had a visit from the originality fairy! :D

Nice work, I loved the deep voice on the guy who said, "If you come over here you can watch television." I left a star off simply because I know you can do better and because I am jealous that my character doesn't have horns. :3

Very Cool

Glad to see you got this thing up.

trippppy

its so different if you watch it after smokin some weed. its like i know who the characters are and that their doing something to get to the other place and there everywhere.

Good and Bad

I went and watched a few of your other videos before I reviewed this so I would be able to better understand your style of flash, and as far as I can tell you are a very laid back animater. Most of your work tends to be sub-par never really "wowing" people, and those who can't think outside the box will just plain blam you and tell you how much they wish you would die.

I actually thought this was very interesting, kinda reminds me of something you might see on Ren and Stimpy show. (minus microsoft sam) This music and art style seems to be consistent with all your flashes, and I can appreciate that.

:::::Where you could improve:::::
-Try getting the whole character to move. I notice in most of your flashes something is always stationary while the whole is moving. Maybe the body is well animated but moves up and down instead of animating movement.
-Voice: Everybody loves microsoft sam, but he just doesn't beat a good voice. invest in a mic if possible.

And last but not least, some Tylenol for reading this long ass review. good job over all. very interesting concept.