Dang!!
HOLD IT! Before you read on let me inform you of my comment. If you truly want to read what I think read the whole comment. If you just want it shortened LOOK AT THE BOTTOM!)
Not gonna lie, I thought this was just going to be another crappy anime story (lol by the way I dont care what anyone thinks of anime, don't try to change my opinion), BUT, instead it was an actual decent and original peice of work.
ALSO, artwork was not limited to one scheme, which I liked for some reason. Usualy no one can really pull it off without looking amateur, but this one had a certain cool attitude about it (dont know how to explain it)
AND FURTHERMORE, although this may not seem important to everyone else, it is to me.
1.) You didn't try to make your flash seem cooler or better by adding in completely useless one-liners (although a few are ok, just not a lot).
2.) You didn't rely on retarded continuous sex jokes to appeal to those with the attention spans of 13 year olds.
3.) You didn't try to make the flash seem (A) TOO serious, or (B) TOO funny.
(A) TOO serious
You didnt try to make some big moral, epiphany, idea come out of your story (or at least not yet). Im okay with an overall message as long as I cant see it coming from a mile away, or have it crammed down my throat by the animator withtin the last few minutes of the flash. I hate that >8[
(B) TOO funny
You added a fairly reasonable amount of jokes! Not too many to give the mood of a comedy, not too few to make it seem like a serious flash. AND ANOTHER THING, the jokes were actual jokes not based on anything! No references, hooray :D.
Sidenote: lol I don't care what Brainstrain91 or anyone else says, that scream joke was hilarious and the lip sync was pretty decent (Again, hell of a lot better than anime lip sync :D :l :D :l :D :l )
IN CONLCUSION (finally!)
This was a very well animated, very smooth and relaxed flash. I liked the style of mixing different artwork but blending them in such a way that it doesn't completely stick out and distract the viewer. The story seemed original and entertaining, not too serious, not too funny. Very relaxed and cool.
FINAL JUDGMENT (zomg!!)
I give this flash a 10/10 because it is truly worth a 10/10. It was well put together, and I could tell this took a decent (but perhaps a great) amount of effort.
..................................... And if any of you don't like it you can suck it :D
(whew!)