Good Animation but thats it.
The style of this video is spot on and animation is for the most part smooth and well done. The story is another thing entirely, I'm not really sure what I'm watching or who I should be rooting for. The story seems like a serious drama on good vs evil but the random bits of "Funny" destroy the mood. The main character (I think) seemed to come out of no ware with no explanation of who or what she was and weather or not we should give a crap about her. I think you should keep going but maybe we should get some background on the protagonist and her life mission in the next episode. Good luck, I look forward to the next one.