Reviews for Halo: Orions Spartans III

[zy10]

Hmmm

The only thing is that the spartan III's were far younger then you make them out to be.

The book Ghosts of Onyx is about the Spartan III Project led by a Spartan II survivor of Reach. Namely the one that ws launched out into space during the boarding of a covanent cruiser. I think his name was Sam... No... Gah I cant remember.

But the animation was good. So I rated on that instead of the actual story line because people are entitled to creativeness. Also the voice acting was fairly decent, unlike alot of the voicing on NG.

Plus, its NG, everytthing by everyone.

Enzer0 responds:

OH YEA LETS PARTY GUYS! WHOOOO!

[sxltnolan]

Honestly...

The animation was fairly good. And even though they're arn't many independent halo based flashes that don't just parody the game, the anime esque story was cheesy as hell. And personally... I thought the voice acting was complete crap. I know you and the rest of the voice acters are just doing your best by trying to speak in a dark emo-ish tone but it just sounds cheesy. If I were you I would try to find some real voice actors on Newgrounds. Also I am guessing that it was decided on to just use a screen name for a character but I personally think it would make the viewer engage in the story if the spartans had auctual names in the sub titles. I really hope you do read this and see if you can take any of this critism seriously. Thanks

Enzer0 responds:

I agree with the names - But they started off as our Gamertags and will continue to be that way.
As for voice actors: I hate the big VA's here. Egoraptor and Rina Chan, stereotypes.
If we all used them NO ONE would ever have a chance.

[didlidi]

/:(

GREAT! exept for the manga style I HATE THAT!!!

Enzer0 responds:

what else can i do it in? Fairly Odd Parents style? how about disney style

[ngcom]

Saved by art

I watched this and just turned off the sound button or at least wished I had. . Some scenes it was like you were talking to yourself. Next time make sure that you get 1 person for the girl parts(which you have), one person for the main character(which you have), and other people for the other interactive scenes(really lacking and noticable).

Just for example in case you don't realize it the scene in the beginning with the soldier and the Spartan it was very obvious you voiced those and there was not really a difference in voice.

[Xlightscreen]

A Faniction For Halo.

Its good to see some halo fan fiction around here. The art on this animation was fantastic with almost all the characters drawn well. The thing that got me was the animation there was almost no movement going on to the point this would made a great interactive comic over a animated movie. As for users saying there can't be many Spartans you just just post a link to the Spartan-III program.