Review for: Halo Orions Spartans III
I think its great that there are a few serious flashes being made and this one with high quality art and good overall vocals is a decent piece of flash, also i beleave it would be worth elaboration on the 'Office games' weather as just a pilot or as a series it has potential to be a hit.
~TWW~
This was boring
The start was slow but I expected it to pick up, but it never did. The writing was awful and the voices were even worse. I can see you were trying to make something that had emotion but adding in borrowed music from the Halo series and sad music does not make a scene great if the acting isn't compelling. The episode dragged on but I watched it too the end and by the end I was unimpressed.
Vector traced images from halo screenshots along with cheesy anime does not make a good animation instead it looks lazy. The characters barely moved and the few times they did it was mostly with the anime characters and even that was terriable. It would have been better if you drew the Spartans yourself instead of tracing them.
You put effort into this but effort alone is not enough. I suggest hiring a writer or find several editors to help you write these episodes. Your story seems boring and the characters are paper thin. I just can't give you anything more then 4 stars because this was below average.
a resounding Meh!
The author creates delusions of epicness in order to describe the mission of some new sparten soldiers.
The badly timed voice acting screwed up the rhythem. Some of the actors sound like they have taken sandpaper to their throats.
The plot stank, but the animation was incredible.
Oh.
You tried too hard (not what she said), to make it serious, if you want to put something on Newgrounds, you have to make it funny, or violent. Other than that, nice drawings.
Meh..
I guess it's worth watching, nice story but this type of subject needs a lot of action. I can see you put a lot of work in it, I've gotta give ya credit for that.