Moar Spehs Marehnes!
Wow, seeing that you've done a damned good Chaos commander (Ahriman?) voice, I love the way that this flash turned out. The idea that Chaos wouldn't know what these metal boxes really are, since they have shed loads of tanks of their own, but you were a little light on the demons that clustered around this piece, so there's work to be done there.
As for the Sonic section, you put yourself in a decent setup, but the jury is still out on whether or not you should have stayed over Sonic the whole time, or if him poking out from behind in certain parts of the piece made it better or worse. Most of me wants to say worse here, but with the way that this worked out, I can't completely condemn it.
Still, I'd have loved to have seen more plot with this one and I've got a pretty good repertoire of Warhammer Fantasy and Warhammer 40k jokes and even a script or two lurking about, if you're interested.
I think that 40k is becoming even more popular and over time, these pieces will certainly be outdated by new rules and so forth, but with your skills, you're certainly able to push forward and give us some good laughs along the way, as Games Workshop launches forward and releases tons of new merchandise, that everyone wants to own, mortgaging their house, selling their relatives and various other seedy methods of cash generation - perhaps you need to focus on that in the next W40k piece?
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