I concur with Boltfox
I'm rating this a 5/10 because, to me, this wasn't terrible but it equally was not great. The pace seemed rather slow, and I only watched the whole thing as I was waiting for something to happen. The animation was good, but the imagery was so random to me that I honestly don't know what the storyline is going on here, even after reading the blurb about it under the icon. The one saving grace from reviews seems to be the music, which didn't do anything for me either. Maybe it's because this is the first time I heard it and the video didn't resonate with me, or maybe because I heard her do so much more with Tarboy.
I stared at the two ravens at the end for about 10 seconds before I noticed the video ended because it was as random and slow paced as the rest.
Ouch, that was kinda blunt. Lemme try this another way >.>
You clearly have talent, your animation and artistic ability is spot on, I only wish you do your entire next animation as colorful and bright as the final bit with her iris changing colors. I understand you were going for the Nightmare Before Christmas and Wizard of Oz 'boring and gray to super colorful' swap at the end, but I think doing that method ultimately hurt this a great deal. So be colorful!
MOAR CUHLARZ!