Welll........
Definitely some good things happening here. I liked the overall structure. I Liked the melodies and piano pattern. However, it sounds like this is a Finale playback, am I right? If i'm wrong then I'm an idiot, oh well. If I was reviewing the material only, then I'd give this a ten. However, you need to find a better way of producing your work so that it sounds less........like a Finale playback. Oh and if you have control over it, put some kind of different reverb on that snare drum. That slapback was driving me crazy.