It was good, just making that clear.
Plot- 10/10
The so greatly portrayed vision of death and flashbacks actually brought a tear to my eye. I also consider it a breath of fresh air in this parody pit
It was creative and I'm sure it took a lot of effort.
Animation- 6/10
To me, the line art seemed way to thick (almost like over 4 stroke thickness for the closeups) and needed a bit of cleaning up.
At times the movements of the characters were a bit unusual looking and wobbly. Try creating a skeleton layer b4 just drawing
The FBF and tweening was pretty balanced out for the situations
nothing to complain about there
Just work on your line art and FBF