Its good but it needs a little work.
It has potential, make the plot a little better. The hide and seek puzzle deal is good , Best of luck
Reviews for "Kidnapped by the Pharaoh"
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its ok but hard to get into it
Its good but it needs a little work.
It has potential, make the plot a little better. The hide and seek puzzle deal is good , Best of luck
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its ok but hard to get into it