What a nice tree- HOLY SHI-
Yeah. Pretty good. In terms of animation, I'd say top notch, in terms of showing events, I'd say under-average. It feels plain, but the art is good, kinda it.
Last bit with the golem and the girl silhouettes is badass though.
Pretty good
I love the Golem design and the final scene was quite good. Really, my only complaint is the reason behind the killing sucks, I mean, maybe if he cheated on her or something, but he sorta comes across as a decent guy who sat his girlfriend down and broke up with her when he didn't think it would work anymore and she's just a whiny emo bitch, but hey, maybe that's what you were shooting for and I just missed the point.
It's not that developed
I don't know why, but it seems like so many animators are making weak stories. Sadly this one is included. There really wasn't any animation or sound to complain about and it was executed in a well done manner but it seems that the golem was just a pointless addition to the story. A heartbroken girl writes on a golem that apparently reacts to hate. So apparently this golem was just sitting there waiting for some bitch to cry a river upon it? I dunno, it just seems a mechanized being known as a golem kinda entices the viewer to expect more than just some petty revenge. Quite frankly, if it were a demon, or a monster, or hell a more demonic looking golem I think I could believe it more but the golem didn't really look the part to me, but that's more of my personal taster than anything. I just think the set up was a bit much for such a little quote. Now, if you were trying to aim for the beginning of a series I think I could appreciate this more and be less of a critical asshole, but if it's just for lol's sake, then don't have it occur under such a weak premise.
It's alright
Bit choppy at parts but still a nice animation. Did you sort of base it off of Canti on FLCL sort of has that feel to it.
Interesting
I hope you have more of a story because it is too short to standalone but just long enough to give a taste of what could come. Even if it's not an animation, say it be in a comic form I'd love to see more.
Great animation!