hmm
the impressions i get from this is that its an opening for a series? not really sure. not alot of information. anyways good for a trailor. i like the way you draw the golem :/
Reviews for "GOLEM"
okay
The animation and music were really cool, I also enjoyed the setting you described in the authors comments. But I had to laugh when the golem came to life because her boyfriend/husband left her. I mean should'nt the "person scorned" be a victim of a murder, or some horrible war or disease. I mean maybe that girl is bi-polar and the relationship wasn't half as serious as she perceived it to be, could I awaken a golem because I was really angry from being stuck in traffic all day. just somthing to think about.
Quite entertaining...
I could have sworn that the grammar was off just a bit, but I looked through it again and didn't find a problem. That's not why you fell short of a ten.
I didn't give you a ten because I didn't feel the flash was about a golem. I get what it's about. Still, I felt as this was a small episode in the much larger world Menace City. It was really good. I enjoyed the cartoon, but it needs to be developed. You could make a great series out of this. Contest winning for sure. Keep it up.
Impkid responds:
Thanks for your commentary, i will work in more stories about Menace city.
Good stufff
But your grammar is atrocious. Bad things happenS....THIS monsters.....English doesn't seem to be your frist language.
Impkid responds:
it's not xDDDDD sorry, i'll see what i can do about it, the thruth is im chilean, and i wanted to post my animation in here, but my english is not the best...
please if there are more mistakes make me know. thanks
im learning english this way too xD
Great job
i loved this flash i really want to see more of this