well...
i suppose it was good for a first time flash but it lacked... a lot. you could try starting with a story that way you have something to base it on so its not quite so random.
Reviews for "Chrono and the pie!"
Uh...
Yeeeeaaahhhh. Kind of a retarded storyline, even for your first flash. And I don't really see what Chrono Trigger has to do with pie, if even remotely anything. Look at some more tutorials, get some more help, then submit again. I dunno if this is gonna get passed judgement...
Wow....
The animation was slightly jumpy, and the face in the text changed size, also that song is extremely annoying, not to be mean or anything.
It's a loop, but at the end you put to refresh to watch again. Why?
Jamieneo66 responds:
Well as i said i'm very new with flash, and well, there was a few bugs in it i.e wit hthe music, and well it was suppose to stop on the last screen >_< not loop :\ lol