its ok
the animation is cool and the story cool but the movements are not too cool :/ anyways i liked it
Reviews for "Madness Retribution"
a bit rough but ok
The walking seemed a bit off and the pauses on a scene before something happens (like showing the guy laying there with head missing) seemed a bit too long. Also some people may call you out on how some scenes seem to be pretty similiar to scenes from Kriinkles's work. I know its a tribute but people might give you some grief about you ripping off Krinkles. Still this could turn into something great and its more than I have done on this site so keep it up.
Good good.
The animation was alright, good sounds, good music and all. I think you should have gotten a little bit more creative in some ways, a lot of the scenes looked a lot like madness 8-9.
Overall it was great. Can't wait to see more from you!
it was ok but...
It played out too much like madness accelerant without tricky
FClock responds:
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Good but needs visual work.
It was a good attempt but your visual elements are off that would better the perspective of a scene. One that I really noticed was the end scene with the three trucks coming towards the main character. The two on the outside looked as though they were floating in midair. Yes, it was good to have them higher up on the platform but the vehicles should have been smaller. If something is farther away naturally it would be smaller. I believe that would have really helped that scene.
Another thing that made the animation distracting is the small cut scenes with the truck. It was so slow. There was not animation going on and the small movement that did happen was choppy. In the beginning when the character jumps down into the truck, he stood their for a moment. I understand that he was driving but some sort of movement would have been a good sign that the animation did not freeze. saw this a lot through out the flash. Overall it was decent but smoother animation and better perspective elements would really bring your animations up to a new level of art.