pretty good
really smooth, and good storyline etc, but could have maybe used your own sprites
Reviews for "Madness Vengeance"
DrClay responds:
LOL those aren't sprites, those are images I drew myself in photoshop
Thanks for the review, good luck to you
Quite good
But there are some points you should improve on.
First of all, the name. It's called "Madness Vengence" is your submission's name, you spell it like "Madness Vengance" in your movie, but the correct spelling would be "Madness Vengeance". I don't want to sound like a dick, but come on, it ís the main title and I think that at least that one should be spelled correctly.
Second of all, your drawing style. You colored everything nicely, and drew all your sprites and stuff yourself, which I think is good. But I personally believe that it would have looked better with some thicker lines, but that could just be me.
Also, it looked like you had been a bit lazy with drawing hands, since your characters almost always had the three fingered hand no matter what they were doing. Even if they were holding a rifle they held it with two the same hands at the same side of the rifle, which looked pretty weird.
I wonder why you positioned the glasses above the horizontal eyeline from the crossface, but considering people don't have to put their sunglasses in front of their eyes all the time , it doesn't matter that much.
To end with the negative stuff I should say that most of your guns didn't look too realistic as well. So I would recommend that you draw them from example next time.
I still think it's a good movie though, the storyline, interrogation scene and the triple camera shots, so don't forget about that.
I'm just saying it could have been better.
But I definately hope to see more from you in the future ;D
DrClay responds:
Thanks for the heads up. Its weird though because I remember spell checking that and everything, and nothing said it was wrong.. I guess its another one of those words..
for some reason, I wanted each outline to only be 2 pixels wide, something about it looked nice to me. Like I wanted it to stand out or something.
I actually thought that is how the animation for the series was done, always having the same look on the hands, unless an original action happens (surrendering and such) then the hands would switch to a full palm. just saying...
I didn't really pay attention to the + on the faces, I stuck the glasses where I would see the eyes if I drew them.
it ok.
reasons why 8 is score.
+1, creative
+1,the cool counter
+1,the two screen thing
+1, 2 characters
+2 sneak tactics
+2music, intro and the pull down mask for smoke thing.
DrClay responds:
but whats the -2 for?
just saying its kinda odd you didn't quite finish your review...
Lazor?
Yeah, good.
the clown in his FRICKIN' SUPAH LESBIAN FORM looked really bad but you know i liked the other bits so....
i'd say 4 stars :3