Reviews for DBZ: "Saiyan's Paradise"

[PopeYodaI]

3 Nerd Boners out of 5

Pretty good, but there are several (obviously) areas that you can improve in:
- Animate!
- Some editing of voice as it is a bit too rough in some areas. See if you can get one of the voice actors from Dragonball Z: The Abridged Series (that AWESOME comedy from Youtube) to lend some aid. If nothing else, I'm sure they can give great tips.
- The lyrics can probably be a bit more original in some places, but that is a relatively minor detail as compared to the first two.

Good luck, and I look forward to see on this being improved and TRULY earning a place in nerd lore (just like the beloved Star Wars Gangsta Rap).

[ZodGod]

ya it needs

It does need to be animated then it would be awsome.

[SakuraSama]

Animate This!

Once you add proper animatoin to this, you will get your 10/10. Awesome song!

[SineCosine]

Very good Preview

When this is finished, I'm sure it will be a 10.

[steveori]

Not bad

Once the animation is done I reckon this will be up there with some of the top movies!
Definite front page material once it's finished.