interesting
The fact you did what the writer of wicked does was great turning a happy story into a grim and dark on, but then again I never really like alice in wonderland it was more dark then I like my fairy tales, but this was good but short also It seemed like an introduction to a video game like the intro of.... like max payne where the wife is murdered and he is trying to figger out what just happened. OH and MAKE A SEQUEL.