I've been playing Professor Layton lately...
...and this is pretty much exactly what I think while I'm playing. Except you didn't make any jokes about him being some kind of paedophile towards that stupid kid. It's like, you're supposed to be out looking for a murderer, preferably before he kills again, why the fuck are you wasting time doing stupid puzzles every 2 minutes? Like I said, you pretty much nailed it.
Animation was top notch, the really gritty style was great (the cuteness of the PL games pisses me off no end) voice acting was really good and fit well with the style and the parallels with the game were fucking funny.
Please do make a sequel, I'll be looking out for it.