Well...
It was ok, I guess. The humor cound have been better, though I guess you did quite well with that ok idea.
Plus, It was more than obvious that you were using the ''Change Pitch'' on Audacity or something, since the voices were so unreal. In the bad way :3
:3.
5 star
its not bad the animation is good but ive seen beter story lines
if anyone corects the spelling go to hell
"Its" needs an apostrophe and a capital "I", as does "ive", "beter" is missing a "t", and there is no punctuation.
"if" needs a capital "i", "corects" is missing an "r", and "hell" should have a capital "H" since you're referring to a place.
Lol.