Great thing!
Great application, I wouldn't quantify this as a game though, but it's the only place to on NGs where you could put it.
As an actual game, I would blam this... BUT... I'll evaluate for it's artistic sense.
Very original, I've never seen anything like this before.
Interesting way to use both vocabulary and the positioning, font, spacing... to illustrate the story. The music also gives an erie twist to it and the speed is of the text is perfect, slow enough to read (if you can read fast) and quick enough to be able to get a sense of chaos.
10/10 for great new idea, I could really see this concept picking up.