Reviews for Charles Burger#@#@#@

[sixflab]

Well

-It feels a little spammy to me since it has no objective at all.

-You really need to work on your cropping skills for the pictures you probably took from a google image search. Use a lasso tool or something that can easily go around what you need so you can crop better.

-The buttons seem a little too big and oddly placed since they are all over the screen. They also aren't needed since Charles Burger just seems to have a mind of his own and go only one way anyway.

-The ending wasn't quite what I expected but there wasn't a point to it other than just fill up our screens with nazi swastickas and random people.

-Just take your time and do little things to make your flashes have more polish to them so they will look nicer even if there isn't a point to them. This would make your work so much better.

-Review Request Club

[Coop]

For a game, it needs some work

I'm not really sure about the plot that this game has (if any) but it is pretty safe to say that you need to work on this piece to get it up to scratch.

Firstly, get yourself a subtitles bar across the bottom of the screen, so that you can get the piece tidied up a little. Practice on cutting out better, as you can make a spammy flash look better, by making the white background from around the half eaten burger disappear. That's really simple, so give it a go.

Perhaps when the door came up, you could have turned the handle into the button, as opposed to making a rhetorical question about opening the door - no other option, so there is nothing else that you can do except close the game and go elsewhere.

Add some more plot to it, like you need to get a few items to open the door and then the psychedelic episode could lead to something that either becomes part 2 or a further extension of this piece.

[Review Request Club]

[Slayer423]

is he......

is he just spamming?

[Munglai]

Very good

Very very good

[Miiyuu]

wooooooow

i give ya a two because atleat your vid actually made it...