Reviews for love tripp

[CaptainAwesome121090]

A Real Trippy Attempt That Can't Be Loved.

I know of a few guys who like to do tons of drugs like weed and stuff. The stuff they describe to me while stoned is sorta of like this flash here....except without all the unicorns and giant talking lobsters. I don't mean to be repetitive, but this just seemed to be an unfinished story. The anmation sort of fit the genre of this movie, but the whole thing was just this huge clusterfuck. If the author wasn't planning on continuing the story, he/she could've at least made it into a music video. I'm sure that along with the creepy introduction and some matching theme song, this flash would've gotten a higher score. Speaking of the story, unless this was a gag, I sort of doubt that this was based on a true story. I could understand the kidnapping of the wife and obsessed women, but the whole trance and backgrounds made it hard to believe. Nonetheless, the exaggeration was good. If it was a gag, I would be careful of placing those five words under your title. People usual get pissed off if the piece doesn't relate to the true story word for word.
*Awesome But Useless Knowledge: (Specifically to sumova) It's been said that the voices were decent but not their best, overall the female voice was "five times better than the man". That's because the female voice sounds like it's hosted by Rina-Chan, a rising star in voice-acting. The other voice I'm unaware of. Correct me if I'm wrong because the credits don't seem to roll for me.

If the author is in fact planning on continuing on this idea of his, The work is good enough to remain unfixed and still remain a unique series on Newgrounds. But I feel that the story will just remind me of the movie 'Obsessed' which was mediocre in my opinion. Nonetheless I have a feeling that this idea will really twist our minds if continued.

[NewGrounder212]

..?

I don't see what's wrong with this.
Rate this unhelpful, and you're just... Dumb.

[Blapple]

Page 1 is impressive, you're doing something right

Roofies or an STD, both through regret and both real. Perhaps your refrencing a persons overreactions that lead to dire consiquences is the flashes' saving grace. And who knows? You might be the next Jerry with the next "Real Legend". It starts small, and choppy, and corney but it evolves with much improvement. These are my expectaions as a viewer. Meet them.

[Deathbybible]

uhg

:/ the music didnt realy fit. I can recall almost 90% of this flash from other movies like dick tracy. most of the flash was with no color (which failed to add any effect of any kind) and wasnt very enjoyable to watch. no real storyline.

[sumova]

What was the basis of this story again?

Someone earlier mentioned the feeling of an unfinished project. I agree with that guy. There was very little going on here. The story seems interesting, but twisted around in that caption. (That caption by the by, was the reason I watched the flash.)

The voice acting was... well what's in between not okay but not terrible? Crude I guess. It was crude at best. Upon a second viewing the woman did five times better than the man. Also, the quality of sound was pretty harsh. Like yelling in a microphone harsh. Trust me when I say it's not my end. Even if that wasn't you there could have been more direction in the voice. Try going less animesque. The dialogue has to go. I got the gist, but that was awful. It reminded me of playing final fantasy and reading people saying, "What the...". Honestly, who says it like that?

The animation could have been better. You know how you see those anime fans who try to draw characters from their favorite shows but had never drew anything before? It was kinda like that. Proportion is a must. But I won't say too much, because I don't know if you were trying to make fun of that style. If not, you need to develop your style and make it a bit more streamlined.

I don't have much more to add. I know I gave you a fairly low score, but I'd like to at least see the next installment. I'd like to see you develop your story much, much more. Finally, I'd like to see that part about making someone fall in love with someone else actually happen.

Put my foot in my mouth with the next piece.