it's awesome... but!
the storyline = awesome
animation= awesome
style = omfgawesome
but you gotta work on those walk/run thingies they look weird
but you get a 5 and 10 either way XD
it's awesome... but!
the storyline = awesome
animation= awesome
style = omfgawesome
but you gotta work on those walk/run thingies they look weird
but you get a 5 and 10 either way XD
I'm really struggling with walk cycles, but i'll keep at it! Thanks for the praise, though, it's encouraging.
Wow.
I dont normally give 10/10s because I always believe something can be improved upon, but in this case it can't.
Everything down the hand drawn animation, coupled with the repetitive music was used to create an emotive storyline that told a beautiful moving tale. The 'raw' use of hand drawing gave it a gritty realism which was just fantastic.
Well done. If you keep your animation like this, you will definatly not be guilty of copying anothers style.
I definitely think there's much to improve on, but i do like a raw-er style, I just think it's a lot more personal than generic cartoons that are starting to all look the same. Don't think I'm just saying this because i'm lazy, but i like a couple of imperfections, there's so much character in them, and i think you can tell a lot from an artist/animator by how they portray people slightly askew or with certain parts exaggerated etc. I dont take psychology or anything. But thanks very much for your advice.
Wow
Good job man
I think...
there should have been a third choice where the bad guy was spared and saved by the chick being brave and stepping up=)
Another reviewer said that as well. it's a good point. The reason I didn't do that is because there's only an up button and a down button in the lift that would each change the man in black's view of what he's capable of, even though both times he discovers his friend's affair. The second time around he realises he could do the same. Thanks for the review though!
ffffffffuck you post modernism!
following me aroundcand shit ever since i learned about it
god dammit
really good movie by the way
FUCK THERE IS NO TRUTH!!!!!
You're crazy, but that's ok.