Here we go
A music video review... double huge review.
FLASH
Animation: 1/2
Voice Acting: 1/2
Story: 2/2
Smoothness: 1/2
Artwork: 1/2
OVERALL: 6/10
SUGGESTION SECTOR:
If you don't have a tablet, I suggest you get one. If you do, learn how to use it better.
The lines on the aliens were too thick.
Not enough detail, it didnt really take away from the animation that much for me since thats my style as well, but it would make the flash look a lot more nicer.
I don't know about the voice for this song. It sounds kind of young for this song.
PRAISE STATION:
Not bad for your first flash! In fact this is really good for a first flash.
You stuck with it the whole project. Sometimes with longer animations, people get lazy throughout it as the thing goes on. You didnt do that- you stayed focused and committed to your animation.
---MUSIC---
Melody: 2/2
Bass: 1/2
Drum: 1/2
Effort: 2/2
Listen ability: 2/2
Catchiness: 3/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 0/2
OVERALL: 16/20 8/10 4/5
SUGGESTION SECTOR:
This song didnt nearly have enough bass as advertised. If you are calling that main riff as bass, it was way too high to be the bass.
I didnt feel the guitars necessary to put here, they werent a complete fail, but not really necessary.
That main riff instrument just sounded annoying. I would change that.
The lyrics werent that bad, I suggest not saying £u¢k every verse. That just doesnt really sound like your style.
The drumming was not good. I just have to say that. You could have blasted the bass drum more, and that would make a world of difference.
PRAISE STATION:
I liked the catchiness of the song, it might be stuck in my head for a while.
I did like the guitar once I got used to it in the song, its just that it wasnt necessary.
FINAL WORD:
Not your best work, not your worst, but not your best. I was disappointed with the music, and impressed with the flash work that you did here. Sorry for the long-ass review.
-Dachampster