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Reviews for "-The wanderer-"

Final round! Here you are, here is your review, here is your song, at the end of the road! Does it succeed?

The Good:
-That's a really nice intro, though it's a tad slow.
-I like the unique little melodies throughout it, they work together with the instruments to create a really cool atmosphere.
-That effect at 2:19. It sounds almost like a rain stick. Really nice.
-Nice change in chording after the shift at about 2:12.
-Mixing's great, as usual.
-Your transitions were fine, and you fooled me with the outro at first - made me think it was a normal fadeout... but then it wasn't!

The Not-So-Good:
-Unfortunately, at about the 2 minute mark, it gets a bit repetitive - you've been using the same melody for a long time. I'm glad you changed it up after that, but still.
-Would have liked more of a tune throughout 2:58-422. While initially the chords are fine, it really needs a stronger melody afterwards.
-With a song this long, it really needs a change in the constant 4/4-ness. There are other time signatures, like 3/4 or 7/8, or if you want to get funky, do something like 5/4 or 11/8, or even 15/16!
-Feels like you always have something playing on each beat. Not the best thing for an entire song.
-Alright, by the 6-minute mark, it's definitely feeling very repetitive - this is partially due to the constant note on each beat, but also due to your tendency to hold onto a single tune for too long - it also seems to get a bit 'meandering', I'd have liked it if you kept a bit more of a constant tune so I had something more to recognize other than just instruments/percussion.

Overall: Wow, you REALLY went away from your usual style on this one. ...and made it 8 minutes long to boot. I'm impressed - you have successfully tried out a new style. Good work! 8.5/10

NGADM Final and stuff.

Very atmospheric, tells a nice tale, and sounds good doing it. Composition wise, this was fantastic in nearly every way, everything felt very natural, and nothing really ever just sort of... happened... like someone showing up to a party with a bomb strapped to their chest... what was there flowed nicely with the rest of the song and didn't throw any unnecessary surprises out there. And I can't emphasize how much I enjoyed the atmosphere of this track... Kudos.

To contrast my comment about no surprises... I also believe a little more could have been done to help push the song forward... yes, it does all sound awesome together as it is, but it is lacking a little bit of feeling of progression, as it doesn't ever really do much more than tip toe forward, which left it feeling a little repetitive or redundant.

Regardless, redundancy aside, this felt... right. The atmosphere of this was absolutely amazing, and if it were put behind a scene instead of just being on its own, I think it'd make one hell of a soundtrack. 8/10.

You may not have won, but you came damn close, gratz on coming all the way to the final.

A little off from usual fast paced type songs I like. But it's still pretty nice for ambient music.