It had its moments.
I really think you have true talent in animation, I love the way you drew the Clocks while using your own style. The song fit the flash very weel and the subtitles helped too. I thought the storyline was creative, but the ending left me sort of confused. I just don't think there was enough elaboration in the beginning for us to get a logical understanding of what we were preparing to see.
Another thing I didn't like was how there were many running sequences. It seemed like in between scenes you mainly put Strawberry Clock running to get somewhere, and it just seemed repetitive. Aside from that, I thought you mixed great animation with a catchy song. I am impressed by animating skill, happy Clock Day and keep up the great work!