Judging for what you did.
I will give you a score based on what i see, not "put more effort" or anything like that cuz the explication is on the video description (its incredible how people skip that).
Everything is just in sync and only lack on a little more agility on it, but i liked the "realistic" touch, without that thing of a character destroying all the cenario and kicking ass without any effort, but your job was ok, i hope sometime you decide to end that episode, i want to see it badly. And just like Ziva said, a little more crazier combos ok, but not overheating or overpowering it will be perfect.
And almost forgot, the BGM part need to be worked too, i don't know if this was lost with the accident but i made a great lack of momentum.
7/10
3/5 (If i could vote 3.5 you would have it)