Cool!
I liked it! Nice drawings and acceptable animating skills. Ity was a bit trippy and the ending was great.
The jokes were a bit stale thought and the voice acting could use some work. But good job overall!
Reviews for "Birthday Nightmare"
Nice
Who hasn't that happened to?
Pretty Good Overall.
It was extremely tripped out.
I think, definitely, That the downfall of this movie was the quality of the voices. It was barely understandable and just wasn't extremely good as a whole. Although the animation itself was good, And therefore it would be quite a simple task for you to ask a good Voice Actor (With a great microphone) to act for your movies. Maybe look into that. It would be an improvement.
Also, The story was lacking. Although it was aimed at being a weird animation, You should aim more for story related animation, therefore your also going to have a lot more comedic parts inputted with a good writer. The lip syncing wasn't perfect either. It just need minor touch ups in a lot of very small areas to overall make it better as a whole.
But other than a few places lacking. It was overall a pretty good clip. So keep this sort of stuff up. Most of the improvements you need are just things you'll run into after getting more used to flash. So keep at it man.
Good luck with it.
Ehh..
The animation was lacking style, but it was still trippy.
...weird but cool
its a little freaky but in kinda like a good way...? I'm not really sure what to say...